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Cynic
Mar 3, 2009 13:28:16 GMT -7
Post by + RJ on Mar 3, 2009 13:28:16 GMT -7
Peace is overrated, And much too often used I prefer a bitter taste To run from burning fuse.
Fire in the distance, And chaos in the crowd It's the world in which I thrive Where twisted is allowed.
To serve for normal cause, I fear I would be bored Life is not so wonderful So let me draw my sword.
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Cynic
Mar 3, 2009 14:46:36 GMT -7
Post by Ink on Mar 3, 2009 14:46:36 GMT -7
Neat! I like it. xD Keep up the good work, you're better than you used to be. *nods*
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Cynic
Mar 3, 2009 14:52:06 GMT -7
Post by + RJ on Mar 3, 2009 14:52:06 GMT -7
*takes a bow* thanks!
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Cynic
Mar 4, 2009 19:43:10 GMT -7
Post by Ink on Mar 4, 2009 19:43:10 GMT -7
I'm not quite sure that the title fits. A cynic believes people are insincere, but they themselves don't necessarily want to cause disruption...
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Cynic
Mar 5, 2009 8:03:03 GMT -7
Post by + RJ on Mar 5, 2009 8:03:03 GMT -7
Cynic also means negative in persona.
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Randy
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Cynic
Mar 9, 2009 13:27:04 GMT -7
Post by Randy on Mar 9, 2009 13:27:04 GMT -7
That's a very neat and interesting poem. It flows and was constructed well. Good job ^^
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