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Post by Ink on Mar 30, 2009 18:09:24 GMT -7
I've Not GotIt just occurred to me
I don’t feel anything right now
I’m for once not sad
But sure as hell not happy
I guess I’m cold
But lately the physical means less
I just realized, just now
That that’s half my problem
Okay, maybe I already knew
But ideas keep reasserting themselves
I forget them but they return
I wish they would stay away
Just now, I noticed
That I only show myself
One side at a time and lately
All you’ve seen is the one I hate
But to everyone else I’m staying the same
They can’t know this side exists
I just grasped something
That I’m quite alone, by myself
But that I have isolated myself too
So part of this is my fault
No, it all is, I could have made more friends
So don’t worry, I’ve not got blame in my heart
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Post by Randy on Apr 1, 2009 10:30:10 GMT -7
Wow, that's really nicely written, and it's something I think a lot of people know what you mean. You did a good job with this one. Like always, thanks for sharing it.
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Post by Ink on Apr 1, 2009 18:38:20 GMT -7
Thanks. ^^ I actually don't like it that much myself, but I'm glad it's better than I thought or whatever. xD
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Post by + RJ on Apr 1, 2009 19:17:14 GMT -7
I like it a lot! Is this the one you were planning on deleting??
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Post by Ink on Apr 1, 2009 19:23:33 GMT -7
Yes
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Post by + RJ on Apr 1, 2009 19:28:14 GMT -7
How could you possibly?!! *stares in wonder*
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Post by Ink on Apr 1, 2009 19:28:36 GMT -7
I don't like it... *groans*
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Post by + RJ on Apr 1, 2009 19:28:57 GMT -7
Strange. Though we're all our own worst critics
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