Echo
Valued Member
Hee hee hee, watch it go! ^ and one more thing, WTF?!!!
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Echoes
Mar 23, 2009 16:49:37 GMT -7
Post by Echo on Mar 23, 2009 16:49:37 GMT -7
The Echoes, all around me whispering, calling asking me, telling me, comanding me, The echoes of the past murmur in my ear, There is not much, but fear the hunch that none of us are here a punch in the face a new taste the worste has past but life will never stop moving so damn fast
-Echo
IDK, its just on my head
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Echoes
Mar 23, 2009 20:51:56 GMT -7
Post by + RJ on Mar 23, 2009 20:51:56 GMT -7
OOh I like it
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Randy
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Call me Randy if you don't want to type "SuperMan" ^^
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Echoes
Mar 24, 2009 10:56:33 GMT -7
Post by Randy on Mar 24, 2009 10:56:33 GMT -7
Okay, obviously your best poem. It describes life really well(that's what it's about, right? That's the message I got, anyways). Good job!
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Echo
Valued Member
Hee hee hee, watch it go! ^ and one more thing, WTF?!!!
Posts: 506
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Echoes
Mar 24, 2009 14:22:13 GMT -7
Post by Echo on Mar 24, 2009 14:22:13 GMT -7
xDDD, ya, its the most "positive" of them all....
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